Pluralization[]
Oh, and also, Nobody, some articles need to be made plural. For example, "Chain gate" would be corrected to be "Chain gates", since there are more than one in a level. However, "Nitrome boss" would not be changed, since there is only one. It should be made clear that only some articles should be made plural, not just all of them. Thanks. --Ayernam (talk) 22:23, October 27, 2012 (UTC)
Pronouns[]
Also, another thing I try to do is get rid of pronouns such as "he", "she", or "it" when they are used at the very beginning of a paragraph to call upon a certain character or enemy. This is because the name of the character should be be apparent the first time he/she/it is mentioned in an paragraph. For example, you wouldn't start an Appearance section saying, "It appears to be green, hexagonal, and has three antennae....". Instead, you would say "The [place article name here] appears to be....". Please let me know if this is confusing or is not necessary to have in an article. -- Ayernam (talk) 14:38, October 28, 2012 (UTC)
- What you think is correct is what seems to be the best way to start a paragraph. Should I add it to the objectives, or another section?--Talk to NOBODY
19:52, October 28, 2012 (UTC)
- I think adding it to the objectives would be good. Just be sure to make it clear (as it might be kind of confusing), and if you have any questions, just ask me here. Thanks! -- Ayernam (talk) 20:55, October 28, 2012 (UTC)
Numbers[]
Oh, and one more thing. (I must be pretty annoying by now, right?) If there is a quantity of items described, such as "4 catapults", it should probably be edited to be "four catapults". This applies to all Arabic numerals under 10. So 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, and 9 should all be deleted and respelled as full English words. Just another grammar rule there. May I add that to the objectives? -- Ayernam (talk) 21:02, October 28, 2012 (UTC)